Is this poem I had to do hw of any good?

English, who wrote a poem to show that we understand the comparisons, plz to read and give constructive criticism! BTW im only 12 or so plz be nice! Kitchen cooking is an art like dance, drawing, writing, any form of expression, gives opinions beyond that nothing else can. The kitchen smells like you like a fine French perfume is used to jazz up an ordinary night, or in a very special occasion. The cuisine is best enjoyed with a friend, and the result is a masterpiece of desire to make your hair She inspired to try new things through them. The kitchen has many different styles, as the clothes you try on the forms should be saying "Hey world, look how I am truly unique!" Cooking is like my family and my friends who are the cornerstone of my life. Sometimes I wonder, as a curious child what would I do without my pots and pans, my spices and herbs, my pride and joy, my everything?

It's good, but some really stood out to me: "I like your hair will inspire you to try new things through them." I think that is very well expressed. First, is necessary to find a word to replace "do". Maybe you could use "fixed" or "Style". "Do" does not fit with the rest of the poem. The second line (the appointment), again, the expression is placed. "It inspires you to try new things through them" … why? Maybe you should cut "through them" part, and if you need more syllables after that, maybe add another descriptive word to go with "new" passion "." maybe. You are a very good writer, especially since you only twelve! Keep up the good work!

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